30 Jun 2013

You Are My Love..!


courtesy - Google

On a rainy day, I wake up lazily...
Sitting in my garden
To enjoy your falling silver thread,
Weather so misty and morning hazy -
I sip my hot tea, letting the warmth comfort me.
All alone and dazed, looking at the fresh daisy,
Your drizzle splashes on the window pane,
And sprinkles over to refresh my brain.

You are my love, who
Pours down joy and cheer,
To brighten my mood and make me smile.
Dripping from the sunshade,
You delight me with your dance show.
Painting my heart in the foggy window,
And humming softly your melody, plop... plop..
I kiss you... I taste you... you’re so sweet.

I poke you lightly and splash into the air,
I walk onto you with wide-spread arms,
Jumping in your puddle and make a hop.
I twirl along with you
And embrace your drizzling hymns -
When you slide gently over my skin
And wash away my stress within,
I realize, you love me more...!


This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

50 comments:

  1. Very beautifully woven thoughts. Rain, Garam Chai and what not!

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    1. and what not..! thank you for dropping by, Fayaz :)

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  2. sweet poem....

    Btw, there is one type error which you can correct. In the 5th line, it should be "letting the warmth comfort me". And not "comforts"

    I love these rain poems :))

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    1. oh ok.. point noted and correction made. thanks ratty.. :)

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  3. look like somebody is in love ;) .. love in the rain :) .. lovely !

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    1. oh thanks dear. i thought of you when i was writing this.. you are one of those rain girls :)

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    2. yea i love rain! and its really nice to hear dat sum1 miles away from me thought abt me wen writing a creative piece :) thankz a lot :)

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  5. oh Hug! May you never fall out of Love. Ever

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    1. thanks for the wishes, Rayla.. hugs :)

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  6. Well, you described your love for rain as if it was alive ... well written !!

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    1. Rain is a form of God's blessing and it lives and letting us live.. ain't it? thanks Aziz :)

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  7. Love is in the Rain..Great Poem...

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  8. wow :) so pleasant like rain .. :)

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    1. glad you liked it Arun. welcome to my blog :)

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    1. thanks seb.. happy to see your comment here :)

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  10. Awww....that was sweeeeet! :)

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    1. glad you like it.. thank you :)

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  12. Good one... well penned. :)

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  13. Lovely poem. Beautiful and emotional. Kudos!

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    1. thank you so much, Ankita. glad you liked it.. :)

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    1. Thank you Vandana, keep visiting :)

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