13 Oct 2013

A Crazy Nightmare


Placing your fat bum in a metal chair
Which traps you with a big 'HaHa' snare,
As she jots down your name
Here starts your frightening game...

Every time the door creaks
'Is it my turn?', your mind voice speaks
Like a vroom-ing car chase
Or a whining rat race -

Whenever she comes out and calls
'Not yet, my dear', laughs the dirty white walls
Ugly lizard stands above your head
Jumps down safely and runs away with a thud...

Mosquitoes buzzing around
You clap at their annoying sound
They shake their butt and fly away
To dance in their own way -

Wonder if they know what's your problem?
As you cough up sticky green phlegm
Like a red tomato, your face glow
'C'mon its obvious' scracccking the fan above...

While the clock tick-tocks
'Still how long?' your body squawks
'More time to go in
You are the last in the line' -

Dusty floor screams, 'Boo..'
Until she calls for you,
Jumping out of the chair
With a screeching affair...

You mock as if you care
Leaving behind that scary nightmare,
'Hee Hee, see you again', cackles the eerie room
As you walk away from -

The doctor's waiting room...!

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43 comments:

  1. The doctor's room is certainly a nightmare for me.... :( Have experienced a lot of times...

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    1. it is almost everyone's nightmare :)

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  2. Ha,ha! I love it! Very whimsical and entertaining. xx

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    1. thanks a lot Vasti. means a lot to me :)

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  3. Loved what you found in that waiting room. I guess that's the trouble with being a writer...too much imagination!

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    1. haha ya very true.. and this shows a lil bit of my crazy mind ;)

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  4. OMG! Haha! This was a fun read Meera..... I hate the waiting lists in clinics too!

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  5. heheh cool yaa :) n yaa itz some what a true story :) :D

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    1. haha ya and albeit a fiction this is based on true incident.. lol :D

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  6. Lol It was all about the Doctor's waiting Room..I wish no Doctor is reading it right now or he/she will be very disheartened to read this.. ;)

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    1. haha maybe not all but for sure few waiting rooms.. will anyone deny? xD

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  7. Hey that was a great take on this subject. Highly imaginative. Loved it. U projected the docs waiting room as sumthing of a horror spooky place

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    1. oh am happy you loved it.. thanks so much Rats. :) :)

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  8. wonderful poem,that wait is really scary

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  9. All the elements are perfect to recreate a Doc's Waiting Room right here on your Blog! Real fun! :)

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  10. Somebody is finding poetry in every thing .. well written

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  11. Been there, done that. Lovely poem.

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  12. That is just absolutely brilliant! ! :o well written meera

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    1. happy you liked it.. thank you Preethi :)

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  13. awesome...had so much fun reading :)

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    1. good to see you here Sugandha :)

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  14. A witty read!
    Doctor's room scares me like anything! :D
    Loved it rattie :D

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    1. glad you loved it, Harshini. thanks :)

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  15. That's a very imaginative look at the Doctor's waiting room.

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  16. ... and most of all - The DENTIST!

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    1. lol yeah exactly that's where i imagined all this :P keep visiting.

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  17. Been there...and I hate that wait, Interesting piece, li'l rat :) Enjoyed reading...

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