My God! Powerful. Leaves you wondering, almost asking for more. Love this!
thank you Sakshi.. :)
thank you Karan.
very emotional and deepkeep in touch,www.beingbeautifulandpretty.com
Nice thriller !!
Beautifull write... ;-)
thanks so much Katja. keep visiting :)
OMG! that made me gasp!
am glad it made an impact.
power writing ! that what it is .. !
thank you so much Ankur. :)
This is so Intense..I can really feel the Pain.. :)
am glad it reached the audience the way i wanted it to be.. thanks a lot Harsha. :)
Very intriguing! I want more!
happy to see your comment. thank you Vashti. :)
The last line gives you spine chills! "To rest in that unfamiliar peace forever"
that's what I wanted. thanks for dropping by..
Amazing start..want to know more!
i dono if I can come up with a sequel cos i think somethings are better left unsaid. thanks a lot Swarn Priya :-)
To rest in that unfamiliar peace forever.... that sounds very scary and chilling!
thanks for reading. keep visiting. :)
A write that leaves a dark niggle at the end.
thanks for reading, Suresh :)
It is a dark poem...powerful and intriguing....leaving the reader with more questions than answers...very good rat
good to see your comment.. but i dint write as a poem but tried a 55er rats.. :)