12 Jan 2014

A Precious Love


Living in the dark, I'm torn between my lust and desire...

Smitten by your beauty, I hold and protect you with a possessive touch...

And whispering sweet nothings to you, my beloved grudge...

Bitten by my greed, I wonder if it is your love or my obsession...

Yet you are the sole reason for my survival,

For I am Gollum and you are My Precious...!


This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.




54 comments:

  1. Aaaah......Lord of the rings....wonderful trilogy....one of the most interesting characters in the series....MY PRECIOUS! Love the wrong english spoken by him :D Hobbitsees

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    1. lol thanks.. and yeah he is one of my favorite characters in that series too.. :)

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    1. thanks Ankur.. good to see you around.. :)

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  3. Lovely one, Meera, as usual.
    It's tough to express so much within just a few words with such a Topic- Love...
    But, then Love needs no words! :)
    (P.S- We have to write in 5 sentences...)

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    1. So true.. love need no words to express but can only be felt.. thanks so much for your lovely comment, Anita.. :)
      btw i wrote the last two lines as one sentence separated with a comma.. well if you meant that.. :)

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  4. I could hear him say it wickedly... "My Preciousssss" :D

    Fantastic composition Meera :)

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    1. thanks Bush. its always good to see you here :)

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    1. thanks Harshita. keep visiting :)

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  7. The lines have a deeper meaning...
    Lovely lines meera!

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  8. These are very dark lines. You might find this amusing but I even made a sinister tune to go with it.

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    1. yea these lines depict the dark obsessive love. and this Gollum could be anyone who is obsessive of something or someone. thanks Brendan. :)

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  9. Very "to the point".
    The message conveyed.

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  10. Has a much deeper meaning than when you first skim through it...
    Lovely...

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    1. Thanks for the read. keep visiting :)

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  11. brings back memories from the movie...wonderful

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    1. thanks for dropping by. keep visiting :)

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  12. I love it! Lord of the Rings! Very cool!

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    1. glad you loved it.. thanks Vashti :)

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  13. ah! nice! Love is so in the air! Short and sweet! Liked it.

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    1. thanks a lot Titli.. good to see you here after a long time :)

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  14. Ohh wow !! in a weird way I think I like Gollum! ;)

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    1. Yeah he impress me in some way too :)

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  15. woww!!! awesome! perfectly written :) :)

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  16. Loved the last line Meera, it made me smile. :)

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    1. glad you loved it, khushboo :)

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  17. reading it again still felt the same preciousness and freshness :)

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    1. good to hear that from you, Ankur. thanks :)

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  18. Hi Meera! I love Lord of the Rings. I really enjoyed this one!

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  19. I liked the composition ...keep sharing !

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    1. Means a lot to me Alka. Thanks. Keep visiting :)

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