30 Apr 2014

The Proposal




Sam is madly in love with her.
Buying her favorite red roses
He reaches her home.
Goes down on his knees,
He offers her the bouquet
'I love you, Jess...'
But she fails to respond
Tears peeping from the corner of his eyes.
He leaves without another word.
While she remains silent,
Beneath the stones.

16 comments:

  1. Oh. . That was an amazing one Meera :)

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  2. Whenever I come across such true love, I smile but it hurts sweetly.

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  3. Sad one. Lovely as usual, Meera.

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  4. Ah what feels ...................

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  5. ohh Meera!!! so touching!! it really makes us feel :) awesome

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  6. tragic ending to a lovely poem

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  7. Beautiful Meera! Tragically moving!

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  8. lovely meera :) been long...good to be back at your blog :)

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  9. A completely unexpected and moving end. Love your poems Meera :)

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  10. BEAUTIFUL...
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  11. Wow! Excellent Meera. You caught me off guard (that doesn't happen to often). Very good.

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  12. Excellent piece of work Meera. Indeed a touching end!

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  13. Thanks everyone for dropping by and liking this little read.. I am glad! :)

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