8 Feb 2016

Nobody knows…



Nobody knows the empty smile I wear
Nobody sees even my single tear

Nobody knows that I am in pain
Nobody hears my prayers go in vain

Nobody knows how deep I love you
Nobody sees my feelings for you

Nobody knows if I am gone
Nobody hears when I’m left alone

Nobody knows when I am confused
Nobody sees my happiness refused

Nobody knows what I desire and dream
Nobody hears my muted scream

Nobody knows what I am longing for
Nobody sees what's there in store

Nobody knows the secrets I hold
Nobody hears what my heart was told

Nobody knows, without you, I become restless
Nobody sees me hiding in the darkness

Nobody knows how do I feel
Nobody knows or probably they never will...



This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

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76 comments:

  1. I really enjoyed your poem, and I understand more than you will ever know.

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    1. I'm glad you can connect to it, Monica. :)

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  2. Beautiful and I felt your pain and my eyes filled with each word I read

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  3. Thats really a heart-touching poem dearie! Well-wriiten.

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  4. "...muted scream"...says it all...

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    1. Yeah, that's how it is. Keep visiting, Sumana.

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  5. Nobody knows...how beautifully penned... Loved the read!

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    1. I'm happy you loved it. Thanks Maitreni :)

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  6. that's the consequence of poetry; now someone knows. A powerful write

    much love...

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    1. Thanks for the read, Gillena :)

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  7. I think people know more than you know, but...

    Nobody says they see how you feel
    Nobody says they see what's concealed

    ...

    Alas.

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    1. You said it right. Nobody says. Thanks, Bjorn :)

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  8. This is so relatable... In a way very true... we all feel like this in one point or the other... I am happy that there is someone for her!!!

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    1. I'm happy too. Thank you, Loco :)

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  9. Too much pain. Trye story for many...
    Well expressed.

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    1. Good to see you here, Anita. :)

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  10. The repetition in your poem works so well to strengthen the meaning of your words; but as Bjorn said, people probably do know more than you realize.

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    1. Not everyone but probably, some do know. Glad you liked it, Mary :)

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  11. Lovely one Meera :-)
    Cheers, Archana - www.travelwitharchie.com

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  12. It is good to write and share these feelings. I liked the repetition, it works very well.

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    1. At times sharing is a relief too. Thank you, Sherry :)

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  13. Beautiful poem. It is very heartfelt and touching. <3

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    1. Always good to see your comments here. Thanks so much, Vashti :)

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  14. I believe we all feel this pain at some point...it takes one who reaches across to show us they know to break this pain.

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    1. True, everyone must have felt this. Thanks, Donna :)

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  15. Yeah.. know the feeling.. when the facades are strong, nobody knows ...

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    1. Yeah you said it right. Thanks Jyotsna :)

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  16. I like your use of repetition in this one.

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    1. I'm glad you liked it, Rosemary :)

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  17. Oh my! I'm feeling a little blue now; so I can so relate to it.
    Lovely, Meera. Very nicely put together.

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    1. Ah, you can relate to my lines. Thanks, Divya. :)

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  18. Well expressed... we see you now... sensitive and creative.
    ZQ

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    1. It means a lot. Thank you so much Garon. :)

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  19. What a lovely outpouring of soul-felt emotions! Truly a gem, Meera :)

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    1. Thanks Ravish for your kind words :)

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  20. unsaid emotions are more painless and remain with us till the end of our life, beautiful poem to express this feeling

    My WOW ENTRY :Diary Confessions - 10 : Hidden Love

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    1. Yeah but then we also need to find a way to express our emotions. Let the unspoken be heard. Thanks, Cifar. :)

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  21. wow! expressed beautifully....

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  22. Nobody knows unless told or at least shown some indications. The pace of things these days make it difficult for others to stop and ponder and for one to be noticed.

    Hank

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    1. Unnoticed, yeah. Thank you, Hank :)

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  23. I feel incredible sadness in your words ....

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    1. I'm happy to see my words reached the readers, the way I wanted it to be.

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  24. The loneliness and sadness is so loud in this poem. I wonder if the speaker will share the words with all those bodies who don't know...

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    1. I wonder the same.. Thanks Magaly :)

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  25. ...nobody knows whats there in store...

    Perhaps the saddest line. We have all gone through someone not returning our feelings - but for NOBODY to know what we have to offer, for no-one to see the person inside. Very sad.

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    1. At one point we all must have went through this feel. Thanks for the read, Margaret :)

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  26. So much depth in the feelings here, no wonder it is a WoW post!

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    1. Good to see you here, Jaideep. Keep visiting! :)

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  28. So sad, emotive, but there are times we have to write it out. Nice work.

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    1. We all should write it out. Thank you, Susie :)

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  29. You express the hearts of so many of us and beautifully!

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    1. I'm happy to know that I penned down the feelings of many. Thank you, Carol :)

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  30. Nobody knows but some have an idea. Nice write!

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    1. Yeah, quite true.. Thanks Bekkie. :)

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  31. Only we can understand our inner struggles and turmoil ... very well expressed ... loved it :-)

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