29 May 2016

What’s Your Name?


Lights went off as I entered her chamber.
I barely could see her
but felt her hot breath on my skin.
I grabbed her hand and asked for her name.
She leaned and kissed. She whispered in my ears.
The snakes on her hair hissed too.
That was the last kiss.
‘My name is Medusa’



21 comments:

  1. You took the Myth and made it your own; very crafty

    Have a good Sunday

    much love...

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  2. Ah, it was spooky...are we ready for this kind of love?...

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  3. Yes we are! - just like the myth the danger and the challenge will always tempt us, I think... A salutary reminder...

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  4. Temptations lead us into those dark rooms and mysteries of the unknown.

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  5. "The snakes on her hair hissed too." Yoiks! A very nice sketch as well.

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  6. Oh I love this. Medusa...now she is someone to be reckoned with!

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  7. This is really delightfully chilling!

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  8. Did you make a mistake. But at least you go a kiss and a hiss!

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  9. some will always enter into the dark..love the mythical feel to it...

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  10. What a fantastic way to use the angle of Medusa. Well done :)

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  11. Ouch - a s-s-super snaky poem :)

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  12. You should have kept your eyes shut!

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  13. Oh Medusa... the most of fatal of the Gorgon... a kiss and you're gone.

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  14. scary, blended surprise and romance well

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  15. Glad you all loved it. Thank you so much. Keep visiting! :)

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