17 May 2016

When The Waves Tell A Story



Over the bubbles and its roaring echoes,
We sashayed along the white sands of this beach…
Our salted memories left to drown,
While each splashing waves whisper our story…
Spreading ripples over the shore as the tide turns away,
He left me all alone and broken, forgetting our beginnings here…

17 comments:

  1. Congrats for the Bonobology contest win. That's a unique name - bonobo... :P

    Destination Infinity

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  2. Salted memories.... giving me goosebumps. Congrats Meera.

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  3. Beautiful! Congratulations for the win! :)

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  4. Salted memories... oh, that is memorable, that phrase. :)

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  5. Beautifully carved, Meera. Loved the choice of words and the emotions conveyed through them. And all the best for the contest. :)

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  6. So sad, but for better and for worse the memories will always be whispered by the sea. Brine and kelp its legacy.

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  7. Rat returns with a bang!! Very good poem :)

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  8. From your salted memories to the waves whispering your story, I could taste, hear and see the bittersweet story here. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

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  9. So sad when beginnings are forgotten. Emotive write.

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  10. Oh my...Yes, there is agony when beginnings are forgotten. Beautiful

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  11. So beautiful, though with a sad undertone!

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  12. beautiful poem, stunning image

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  13. Thank you all for your lovely comments. Keep visiting! :)

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  14. Beautiful flow of words! Perfect for the image :)

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  15. Beautiful verse to go with a beautiful click.

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  16. Nice! Love "sashayed" for how we move at the beach.

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