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On a rainy day, I wake up lazily...
Sitting in my garden
To enjoy your falling silver thread,
Weather so misty and morning hazy -
I sip my hot tea, letting the warmth comfort me.
All alone and dazed, looking at the fresh daisy,
Your drizzle splashes on the window pane,
And sprinkles over to refresh my brain.
You are my love, who
Pours down joy and cheer,
To brighten my mood and make me smile.
Dripping from the sunshade,
You delight me with your dance show.
Painting my heart in the foggy
window,
And humming softly your melody, plop... plop..
I kiss you... I taste you... you’re so sweet.
I poke you lightly and splash into the air,
I walk onto you with wide-spread arms,
Jumping in your puddle and make a hop.
I twirl along with you
And embrace your drizzling hymns -
When you slide gently over my skin
And wash away my stress within,
I realize, you love me more...!
loved your poem!
ReplyDeletethanks Megha :)
Deleteahem- ahem.....:p
ReplyDelete^_^ hehe
DeleteVery beautifully woven thoughts. Rain, Garam Chai and what not!
ReplyDeleteand what not..! thank you for dropping by, Fayaz :)
Deletesweet poem....
ReplyDeleteBtw, there is one type error which you can correct. In the 5th line, it should be "letting the warmth comfort me". And not "comforts"
I love these rain poems :))
oh ok.. point noted and correction made. thanks ratty.. :)
Deleteno probs rat ^_^
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Deletebeautiful weave !
ReplyDeletethanks and keep visiting :)
DeleteWonderful poem !
ReplyDeletethanks Uma.. :)
Deletelook like somebody is in love ;) .. love in the rain :) .. lovely !
ReplyDeletelol.. thanks :p
Deletewoww beautiful!
ReplyDeleteoh thanks dear. i thought of you when i was writing this.. you are one of those rain girls :)
Deleteyea i love rain! and its really nice to hear dat sum1 miles away from me thought abt me wen writing a creative piece :) thankz a lot :)
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Deleteoh Hug! May you never fall out of Love. Ever
ReplyDeletethanks for the wishes, Rayla.. hugs :)
DeleteWell, you described your love for rain as if it was alive ... well written !!
ReplyDeleteRain is a form of God's blessing and it lives and letting us live.. ain't it? thanks Aziz :)
DeleteLove is in the Rain..Great Poem...
ReplyDeletethank you Harsha :)
Deletewow :) so pleasant like rain .. :)
ReplyDeleteglad you liked it Arun. welcome to my blog :)
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ReplyDeletethanks seb.. happy to see your comment here :)
DeleteAwww....that was sweeeeet! :)
ReplyDelete:) thanks bushra.
Deletenice poetry. like it
ReplyDeleteglad you like it.. thank you :)
DeleteWell Done!! Thank you!
ReplyDeletethanks W.. cheers :)
DeleteBeautiful.
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DeleteLovely!!
ReplyDeletethank you Vijay :)
DeleteGood one... well penned. :)
ReplyDeletethanks, Indrani :)
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ReplyDeletethank you, Ashwin :)
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ReplyDelete:) thanks ali..
DeleteLovely poem. Beautiful and emotional. Kudos!
ReplyDeletethank you so much, Ankita. glad you liked it.. :)
Deletesuch a romantic poem:)
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